Tuesday, March 11, 2008

Eternity...


“ Mom, get me the watch from my drawer”

“ Which one do you want? The one with a leather strap or the steel!!! ”

“ Anyone ”

Busy, yet ornately strapping the black one around my wrist, memories ran faster than the seconds needle.

Years back where a watch reflected flamboyance. A tender age that yearned to be old. The 10 year old graduated from primary classes. Another vacation chugged him to the tranquil native village. Grandma longed to cuddle him in her lap. He who loved freedom always blushed in the attention. He continued playing, plundering runs at will from a deflated bowling. His 6-year-old brother waited for a lapse in concentration.

“ Chettan (brother), am tired bowling, please give me the bat”

“ Eda, two more over’s, maximum 5 more minutes”.

He dashed inside and I ran behind. Eyes groped in the dark and adjusted slowly. His little hands pointed and decided on the bigger needle first. It stood pointing 6.

“ Ha ha, Till 12:30 only ” – Tinku quipped after looking sharply at the needles of the grandfather clock. He had perfected the mathematics of five. The bigger needle at 1, 2, or 3, anywhere till 11 multiplied by 5 presented him the perfect time.

First standard taught him the simplicities of the hours, minutes and seconds in a clock, thought both of us weren’t aware of the importance of time. The pendulum oscillated without rest.

Grandma watched the proceedings from the portico and smiled

“ Enough of your cricket. Now take bath and come for lunch”

“ Ammammey(grandma) pleaaaase” Tinku pleaded with a lengthy overtone.

“ After lunch, I will give you a surprise ”

Tinku agreed with a smile.

Evening woke early.

“ Dress up kids, don’t we have to go out”. Grandma said kissing Tinku’s small nose.

His eyes slipped to sleep and the cute body shrinked itself into an embryo shape.

x--------x

Full sleeves and tucked shirts in the knee length trousers clothed us to a gentlemanly demeanor.

“ Where are we going?” I enquired the third time.

“ Thalassery town” - Ajitechi answered.

She looked beautiful in her Aqua blue sari and a matching blouse. The bangles shied when the fingers adjusted her earrings that swung with those black stones embroidered by a thin strip of gold. Some strands of mischievous long hair kissed those earrings before someone noticed the naughty act.

Tinku jumped to her waiting hands.

My mind pictured and discussed the falooda’s waiting in crystal glasses. The ‘rose and white’ mix, topped with vanilla flavoured ice cream was the food aficionado’s delight. The transparent small slippery balls that teased the teeth and danced around the liquid gave a smile. And the noodle like ingredient had heavens tasting on earth.

We walked on a different course altogether. No falooda’s?? Now what!!! We wondered.

The shop of shiny, leathery, silvery and golden watches hung on the glass sheet; most of them displaying 10 minutes past 10 were a treat.

“ Lallu, select the one u like”

I looked in awe; an inexplicable happiness swathed my skin, and in all kindness returned some Goosebumps of excitement.

Frames of me being the most important in the sixth class, and a crowd of boys and girls hovering around me to have a glimpse of the newfound fortune stimulated some corners of the heart.

“I too want the watch” – Tinku interfered.

“ When you are as big as your brother, there will be one for you”

Unrelenting he remained silent, cheeks red and puffed in anger, eyes brimming with tears. Ajitechi had the answer with a digital watch from the showcase. 06:47 PM, and the colon played hide and seek.

“ I liked this one ” – With a watch in hand I declared gleaming.

“ Take another one Lallu, it’s a ladies watch” – Ajitechi had her opinion.

“ NO”

“ Let him have his choice” –Ammamma stood by my side.

And thus I wore a silvery steel strap, with a name calligraphed in the smallest of print on the dial. Sst Shalini- it read from HMT.

Years rolled ahead. Watches upon watches, each costlier, beautiful than the preceding came to adorn my wrist, but none could give the feeling of being wealthy and important. The Sst still lies on my desk, ‘a souvenir’, wind it and it unwinds memories of Grandma, Ajitechi, Thalassery, their warmth, our childhood…Thus filling the turf with umpteen examples of simplicity, selfless acts of kindness, of unspoken deeds of love, reminding those nostalgic evenings which never will be back to fill the void that grandma left, again to make me feel important at least once again.

The pendulum oscillates, without rest, without complaints, at every crossing half hour, the silent tick-tock's chime loud, waking me out of my reveries, elucidating the new world ahead and the multitudes of opportunities it has in offer.

Thank you Grandma, for accustoming me to what time is, to my parents who taught me the importance of time, and to all who integrated in my life to make every passing second entertaining and life meaningful.

11 comments:

Anonymous said...

felt gr8 to walk down the memory lane :)

i guess, a lot of us here has similar childhoods ... no wonder we understand each other so well!

Unknown said...

enikku ammammene kaanan kothi aavunnu. karachil varunnu.

Rejoy said...

hmm..nice 1..a memoir...In my case, I cud see all those days coming 2 life again...This was a fast moving narration..but can u write it more frm a 10 yr old boy's eyes,here there are places wher u've done so,but..I feel it'd be gr8 if u experiment by writing it entirely frm a 10 yr old's perspective..
pinne..1 more thing, tht I didnt like abt this article,perhaps u'd do well to edit tht part....I'm a good bowler...even at 6 yrs I was pretty sharp,...16 yrs mumbu thudare thudare kalikal thottathinte paka ingne alla theerkkendathu....come to the cricket pitch....we'll sort it out there...:)....naanamillallo, oru 1st std payyane 4 adicha karyam boast cheythu nadakkan......

Unknown said...

nice one. good old, ever memorable childhood days just passed by..... and thanks i got my topic for the next blog:)

Preetha Nair said...

Summer holidays ...something I remember the most....and probably only thing worth remembering..

Great slice of memory Rejizee....
and very well written..:)

Preetha Nair said...

Rejoy: Eyaalde comment vaayich njaan daa ippozhum chirichukodirikunnu....
....adu vallathoru vellu viliyaayipoyi....hahahhahaha
LOL!!!

Xorkes said...

well written!

Mavron said...

a true blue 'down d memory lane' write up...but more should be said about the style...lucid after a lot many passages.this simplicity helps,so that the style doesnt block d substance.thumbs up:)

PS.wat a coincidence..ma new post is about a childhood memory too.

Anonymous said...

rejile, rejoyude velluvilikku utharamilla lle? ayyeeee...

celestial said...

nostalgic memoire dear....
like usage of wordings and subtility in some places....

"Some strands of mischievous long hair kissed those earrings before someone noticed the naughty act."

but i like to point out one small mistake...... initially you started the narration refering the "hero" as "him" and "he"... later you unknowingly changed to "I" and "me"....

its natural; if you are writing your everloving memories..... but do correct it to "me" and "I" all through out.....

Rejil Krishnan said...

@ettans...yes, xactly:) and the answer to ur nxt qn cmes nxt...
@priya...dnt cry dear.. :) smile an everlasting smile...
@Tinku aka rejoy... innum ur bowling is pazhampoli... victory for me is cakewalk..challenge accepted in this pitch...;)
@charu...thanks and does it take so long for ideas to bloom...:P
@preetechi... rejoy ko kannakil edukkanda.. chumma...innum avan tholkkum...
@xorkes..thanks... :)
@Mavron..KV'ians and SYMBIans...gel well.. :)
@celestial...No answer... :)had seen it..and didn't knw how to change it..so kept it as it is.. :P